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There is so much to like in this chapter. I am really enjoying Kees’ grounded perspective, especially with being unimpressed by the fireworks.

The glimpses into the deeper lore of the world are definitely reeling me in, specifically the antibiotics.

And the paragraph where the rest of the party are introduced just really works. A lot of times, too many names can come too fast, we may just kind of gloss over it, right? But this introduction was great. I was already curious about them, I am as the reader also waiting for them, and then the short but vivid descriptions set each of them apart and give me an identifier to remember them by.

So, now I’m curious about each of them, and invested in all ten to varying degrees.

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