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This is a beautiful line: “Dhinal knew places shed names as snakes shed skin, time sloughing all.”

I really enjoy Dhinal’s inner monologue and thoughts, they feel world-wise while also maintaining his lack of formal education.

I also enjoy the descriptions of the Twigs. I have such a clear mental image of them swimming across the river.

Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

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