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Just so you know, I will never forgive you for this.

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I know, thank you. This is solid feedback. (I still think I handled the ending relatively well, what I’m already considering is how I’m going to weave in those feelings into the longer trilogy, especially since that is set a wee while after DiH.)

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Oh, I can't fault the writing. Very well done! But STILL.

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